Science Fiction – The Iron Man

December 15th, 2017

In Science Fiction we have been writing our own stories using The Iron Man as a model.

We have identified that the author, Ted Hughes, used lots of similes, repetition and short dramatic sentences. we have successfully incorporated these features into our stories.

Here’s an excerpt from one of our stories:

‘Fingers twitching like a newborn baby, his leg, his rusty right leg, lunged backwards. Never before had he seen a  mine, his ear then slightly slipped to an awkwardly diagonal left. Numbers shone in his over-sized eye, then the other green, orange and then they turned back to the turquoise blue.’


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